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Studio One
College of St. Benedict
37 South College Avenue
St. Joseph, MN 56374

March 19, 2010

Jake Kilroy:

The editors and staff of Studio One received your submission for consideration in the 2010 issue. Your submission was carefully evaluated for publication by our literary staff and editors. Although your submission did not make the final selection round, we would like to thank you for sharing your talent with us. We appreciate your interest in Studio One and encourage you to submit your work again for consideration in the 2011 issue.

If you would like to receive a copy of this year’s issue of Studio One, please send a self-addressed stamped manila envelope along with $6 for shipping and handling charges to the address at the bottom of this page. Please write “book request” on the envelope to guarantee prompt and appropriate attention.


We here at Studio One and the College of Saint Benedict and Saint John’s University look forward to your future submissions.

Thank you,

Katya Karaz and Miles Johnson
The Editors

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Thank you for giving us the opportunity to review your work. It was one of the hundreds that we received for the Winter 2009 issue of SNReview (www.snreview.org). We, however, will pass on the opportunity to publish it. Remember that this is not a reflection on the quality of the work but on the nature of the publishing market. Good luck with your writing, and we apologize for taking so long to respond.

Joseph Conlin
JosephConlin@SNReview.org
www.SNReview.org

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Dear Jake,

Please accept our apologies for the delay in response to your submission; we have been undergoing major editorial changes for the last several months. Although we appreciate your talent and vision, we will not be publishing your work at this time. Thank you for your interest in Greatcoat. We wish you the best of luck in your writing endeavors.

Stephanie Walkenshaw and Elisabeth Whitehead, Editors

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We regret to inform you that your submission to the FictionWeek Literary review was not accepted for the Fall 2009 issue. There are many reasons why a story or poem might not be accepted. Often it has nothing to do with the quality of the writing. For this issue, the submission committee tried to select a variety of topics and writing styles, but of the hundreds and hundreds of submissions we received, only a very few could be selected for the Fall 2009 issue. You are welcome to submit another story or poem for our Spring 2010 issue.

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Dear Jake Kilroy:

Thank you for sending us "Took Two, Tricky, Churchfire". We really enjoyed this piece, but we didn't feel it was right for this issue.

We hope that you will continue to send us your work. Best of luck.

Sincerely,

The Editors of The Potomac Review

We liked Church Fire

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Thank you for your interest in Smartish Pace and for allowing us to read your poems. Unfortunately your poems were not selected for publication. We hope that you will consider sending poems to Smartish Pace again in the future (please note our policy of 1 submission per year; though you may also enter our contests) and support our independent publication by ordering our new issue or a subscription.

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Greetings, Mr. Kilroy,

The editors and staff of Studio 1 have received your submissions, The Vices Of Youth, Took Two, Orange Rose, Tricky, and Churchfire, for consideration in the 2010 issue. Your submissions were evaluated for publication by our staff, and we have decided to decline from publishing Took Two, Orange Rose, Tricky, and Churchfire. The Vices Of Youth is still being considered. Thank you for sharing your work with us. We appreciate your interest in Studio 1 and encourage you to submit your works again for consideration in the 2011 issue.

If you would like to receive a copy of this year's issue of Studio 1, please send a self-addressed stamped manila envelope along with $6 for shipping and handling charges to


STUDIO ONE: Book Request

College of St. Benedict

37 South College Ave.

St. Joseph, MN, 56374.



We here at CSB/SJU look forward to your future submissions.



Thank you,



Editor-In-Chief,

Studio 1

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Dear Jake Kilroy,

I'm very sorry that it's taken us forever to respond to your submission. We've been slogged with online submissions, and in fact have closed the gates until January 2010.

I'm also sorry to say that your poems weren't a good fit for us. We wish you the best of luck in placing them elsewhere.

Warm wishes from New Orleans,

Mark Yakich
Poetry Editor

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Dear Jake,

Thank for taking the time to submit your work to Inertia. We regret to inform you that we cannot accept your submission at this time.

We greatly appreciate your efforts and hope you will continue to follow Inertia.


Best,
The Editors


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Dear Mr. Kilroy,

I am sorry to say that we were not able to include any of your poems
in the second issue, which went online before the originally scheduled
date. I apologize for not responding before the new issue went live.

Sincerely,
Jim Cronin, Poetry Editor,
White Whale Review
www.whitewhalereview.com